Friday, October 26, 2007

Mary Jane you wench (a continuation)!

And here's a little bonus for you, just before I leave this blog for the weekend: part 2 of the story!

This was also scripted on the same day after Theo gave me a suggestion to use Superman since he was already in the background...nonchalantly thrown in by me in the first script as a sight gag. How it came back and paid dividends!

Panel Y (actually, let's just call this Panel 8) - As Captain Ash and Spider-man charge towards each other, Superman, who was a casual observer several panels ago (talk about foreshadowing!) all of a sudden flies down and swoops up Mary Jane in his arms.

Panel 9 - Captain Ash and Spider-man stop momentarily and look up to the sky. Spider-man points upwards.

Spider-man: "Look! Up in the sky! It's a bird! It's a plane!"

BC: "It's some schmuck in red undies with your girlfriend, you moron!"

Panel 10 - Up in the sky, Superman has Mary Jane in his arms. She doesn't look afraid though...she's embracing Superman with her arms around his neck!

Mary Jane: "So...are you really more powerful than a locomotive? I mean...everywhere?"

Panel 11 - Mary Jane looks down at Superman's...uh...package.

Mary Jane: "
Please don't say you're faster than a speeding bullet."

Panel 12 - Superman nods and Mary Jane leans in and kisses him on the lips.

Panel 13 - Superman gives the reader a knowing wink.

Superman: "Hail to the SUPER king, baby!"

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